All Comments on 'New Year's Surprise'

by Tawdrydad

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collin4xxxcollin4xxxabout 2 years ago

Good story…. But personally would have loved for him to creampied her and knocked up his cousin. Perhaps she could join him and his wife later in there stay, then move in with them after she turns up pregnant. And the wife couldn’t let her be the only one pregnant by her husband…

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wish he had cum inside her. Impregnating her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Excellent little fantasy. You kept in the realm of possibility. No forcing further complication. There is enough here to let a reader's imagination run wild. Not every story needs more chapters.

VikingboyVikingboyover 1 year ago

How about Part Two, where we find out who his wife was fucking?

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