All Comments on 'Newlyweds'

what a great life chris has. It's called abuse and coercive control, you can get help for it. Hopefully subchristopher keeps it a fantasy.

Nice work. Good start to what will hopefully be a longer series.

I like your writing style, it flows nicely. Very refreshing.

I enjoy stories about the early relationships in an FLM and how they develop. While this offering did not provide the backstory to explain how this couple got to where they are, much is implied. It is so sweetly told, that the characters come alive. Thanks for sharing. JQGraves

I enjoy your writing style very much...I love your themes of corporal punishment, chastity and strict Female control...the paddle was mentioned only briefly in this story...but my imagination let me imagine Chris' frequent paddlings!

every time I read another of your stories, I think to Myself that you have a beautiful mind, sub-christopher. 5 stars.