All Comments on 'News Story Ch. 02'

Terrific plot, great suspense. Can't wait to see where you are taking "Jean". On a different note, my compliments on your punctuation and spelling. I particularly noted the correct use of "taut", so often misspelled by writers as "taught". Please don't keep us waiting!

A definate continuation to this story is needed. Love the plot, and everything about it. Very well thought out, great writing. Wonder if the Editor is in on the "Man's World" business or has he participated in some woman's fantasy. Keep up the good work, love to read more.