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All Comments on 'Next Door Neighbor Ch. 01'

by WHEELLOVE

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 11 years ago
The story is a little hard to read.

It would help to use quotation marks (" ") to separate the dialogue from the rest of the wording.

The storyline or plot was good and erotic, but the story was a little hard to follow.

Sucker4BoobiesSucker4Boobies4 months ago

Not bad for a quickie.

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