All Comments on 'Next Generation'

Please tell me there’s a part two

OMG I can’t wait to read the rest of this story. Charlie is soooo hot. Zoey so sexy. And the way she gives in and then comes to revel in her femininity and subservience is just deliciously sexy.

They should go 'shopping' again and pick up some toys for her to enjoy, dildos, vibrators etc. Lube if she gives up her back door. At some point, they'll need to study up on child birth because eventually she'll get pregnant and when its delivery time they will need the info drilled into them because they only have each other. Unless you bring more survivors into it. They could find a Ham radio and begin broadcasting. If others have thought of it as well they could talk to people very far away, share skills, experiences, life in general. If Charlie handles the coms they may or may not get responses. Others truly alone and desperate for companionship may answer back. Zoey on the air could draw many more to respond which could be good and/or bad depending on the intentions of the responder. She also could draw a response from any surviving females. Ultimately they will need to build a community if they continue down the 'save humanity' path. Assist changing others for more available breeding females. As many as possible really with a few guys left as guys with strong masculine genetics and to create a diverse enough DNA base. Might be possible with only Charlie and everyone else made women. He'd be a very busy boy though. 😆

Story is kind of slow but I like the basic premise, and oh my I'd sure like some of those pills!

No need of years of meds and painful surgery just to be a poor imitation, just a few weeks of pills and lifelong dreams and prayers would be accomplished - there would be a hell of a line down at the pharmacy but I'd sure be in it.

Great story. Finish it please