All Comments on 'Next Step Blues Pt. 04'

Poorly written and in the wrong category

"Poorly written and in the wrong category" - Yeah, that seems to be a sad standard these days.

So she can now fuck around on her wannabe cuckold. What is the point of rules if you then break them?

I enjoyed this series (one of the few apparently). Unusual for this kind of story, but I liked all of the careful thought and discussion between you and your wife.

The packet of condoms was a huge let down for me. Tainted everything. Your life, your choice, I wish you well. I don't judge people, but it diminished my enjoyment of your story.

Hope the old cow doesn’t cause the geezer cuck to have a stroke.

I gave this a 4. 5s for the first three. Just saw the score for this story. Hmm, wasn't just me that disliked the last sentence. Or maybe others disliked the entire thing.

I hope you keep writing.