by gripman
And large words 2 (cock, cunt etc.) Writer you seem youngish - 18 or less for your feverish rambling. Now your research was on the money depicting most long married couples aahuh aahuh.
Ah what the hell, the teenie boppers will love you plus a few sicko's but since there is a repetitive pump a pump and wimp a wimp about your tails it means sooner or later you will have to learn to write without all the sick props aahuh aahuh or they will leave you for greener or sickerer pastures. So don't get anything erotic in there by mistake as they will just want more.