by cosmic709
hot story- hot characters- hot scene- would make a great porn vid- thanx 4 sharing
What a terrific first story from this author (at least on this site.). Your characters are smoking hot and the sex is steamy. Super Job.
I do feel obligated to point out that the comment by Anonymous: Very Good but...did say that her/his opinion was a personal one and for that reason alone should not be attacked for stating such. Jeez Ladies and Gents, it doesn't cost a thing to just be nice.
How many of us have been around the hot teenage neighbor who is totally off-limits and usually straight? In this story, 10 years is perfect. Want to read more about Sean and Nick.
When I was a much younger man, I fucked one of the hottest, most ripped guys I've ever met, and got off on the fact that as I got close to getting off he started begging me not to cum in his "pussy", which naturally I did, and he wouldn't have had it any other way. I enjoyed the contrast of a big, masculine man giving up his "cunt", and continue to be turned on by it today. Basically, the previous reviewer having had a different experience or viewpoint wants you to change to suit him. I say just be you, and let critics go fuck themselves. You wouldn't go into a fucking gallery and tell a fucking painter you like their art, except that you'd like them to replace red with purple to suit your neuroses, because that would be rude.
The story was excellent. However, a couple of personal turn offs that almost made me stop reading were your use of the words 'cunt' and "pussy" describing a man's ass or anal canal. These are men. Men do not have a 'cunt' or a 'pussy', at least the ones I have been with don't and I would never want them to either. Please leave the feminine body parts to the ladies who have them and use them so well.
I truly enjoyed this story and hope it isn't the last we hear of Sean and Nick!