All Comments on 'Nicole's Decent Ch. 01'

Yes, a good first story here, and seems we have a series to look forward to...like the style..a fun story!

l great story, waiting for more follow up between gale and nicole. :D

Wow, I loved the story. Gale an older man who is very well built made me want more. Good read :-)

You should proof read your stories before publishing them..

Sexy, and made me horny hoping for a series

Is Nicole decent? Pretty sure the word you're searching for is deScent.

English teachers weep.

The intended title for this is Nicole is Decent. That's why it is decent not descent.

Turned me off from lack of editing.

Yes, have someone with a good grasp of spelling, grammar and punctuation proofread your stories (including the title) before you upload them.

a little unfair to slam this purely for grammatical errors. The ideas and basics are all present. It just needs tweaking. Well done I reckon.

I won't get on you for the spelling (not the title; describing herself as "is girlfriend" on Page 1, etc.); Seems you've seen a ton of that.

However, somehow, the title made me think we'd be getting this all from the POV of someone other than Nicole herself... Maybe the man?!

I'd be more-interested to read about her from the perspective of the guys she's with. (This one, or any others in past, future, etc.)

Perhaps it would appeal more if the title was spelt correctly!

I was really into the story but I kept seeing A LOT of misspelled words. If you could just work on your grammar...

Only average because of the spelling mistakes