by Sophie1605
I was really into the story but I kept seeing A LOT of misspelled words. If you could just work on your grammar...
I won't get on you for the spelling (not the title; describing herself as "is girlfriend" on Page 1, etc.); Seems you've seen a ton of that.
However, somehow, the title made me think we'd be getting this all from the POV of someone other than Nicole herself... Maybe the man?!
I'd be more-interested to read about her from the perspective of the guys she's with. (This one, or any others in past, future, etc.)
a little unfair to slam this purely for grammatical errors. The ideas and basics are all present. It just needs tweaking. Well done I reckon.
Yes, have someone with a good grasp of spelling, grammar and punctuation proofread your stories (including the title) before you upload them.
The intended title for this is Nicole is Decent. That's why it is decent not descent.
Is Nicole decent? Pretty sure the word you're searching for is deScent.
English teachers weep.
Wow, I loved the story. Gale an older man who is very well built made me want more. Good read :-)
l great story, waiting for more follow up between gale and nicole. :D
Yes, a good first story here, and seems we have a series to look forward to...like the style..a fun story!