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by hotrodbrown

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hansbwlhansbwlover 14 years ago
Another

story with far too long paragraphs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
New use for a cell phone

A completely new idea . Like it, and are surely going to use it. Read "Le declic" by Milo Manara!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Phone sex

This got my cock hard.I loved the story.

hotrodbrownhotrodbrownover 14 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments

Thanks for anyone commenting. These were my first two submissions and i've taken your comments on board. The two stories currently awaiting approval have far better paragraphing. Hope you enjoy

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Good

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
oh god

I'm a bit of an exhibitionist I guess, sometimes I'm on live cam or IM chat/video so this story really resonates with me. I loved the story! Makes me want to turn on my webcam and put on a show....

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