- Loving Wives
- Night Game
- Page 2
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Click hereThe next thing she would remember was the fact there were now three other bodies in that bed. There were mouths on pussies... cocks in mouths, and no one cared who was doing what to whom. This was turning into something that none of them wanted to stop. Ashley had watched Terry with Sally and seen Sally with her face buried between her legs.
Four people in a single king-sized bed, laughing, loving and savoring the thrills and the adventures of this evening turned into night.
No one needed to look at a clock. They had a designated driver to do that. And that is exactly what Jennifer Grimes did. At the proper time, she called both women and told them it was time to get ready to go home.
Quick showers were the rule. The men involved weren't all that happy about the girls leaving them, but that was the plan for tonight.
About twenty minutes later, right on schedule, the women walked to the parking lot and got into the car to go home. The only problem was their designated driver was not in the car. They laughed about the way their night ended up, and soon the blond Jennifer opened the driver side door and slipped inside.
"Where have you been, Blondie?" ask Sally with a chuckle in her voice.
The blond, Jennifer turned to face the women sitting in the back seat of the luxury SUV. "You guys are not going to believe this but, I hit the jackpot tonight."
Ashley asked... "What do you mean?"
"I got picked up by two studs that wanted some company... And I was it." Both women were smiling and chuckling at the news.
"Do either of you know what a 'spit-roast' is?" Jennifer asked innocently.
Laughing almost uncontrollably, the women in the back seat were eager to explain a spit-roast, when Jennifer pointed to the front exit of the hotel.
"There..." she said, pointing at the light over the front door. "There are the two guys I met tonight."
Suddenly the laughter stopped.
"Those, Jennifer, are our husbands!"
It's at this point I should be explaining what happened to all these people. But this is a story. You all have your own ending in your mind. And yours is the correct ending. I hope you like it.
End
- COMMENTS
Jensenslover9 months agoLAZY writing, unwillingness to finish the damn story is not cute or clever. 1*
Anonymous9 months agoNice setup. Maybe you can find the time to write the whole story. You could have been a contender; Fail.
Anonymous9 months agoNicely ended. I love when authors let the reader finish the story in their own way. But with the ending that was written is there really anymore that needs to be said? 5 stars
Anonymous9 months agoI never liked unfinished stories. It means the author either couldn't come up with a likely or satisfactory ending or he just got lazy.
RCPeterGabriel9 months agoCliffhangers or sudden surprise endings are fine, I use both types when I write but both of those are valid literary tools. Leaving a story unfinished is simply lazy and unacceptable. Especially when you ask the reader to figure it out for you. Either do the work or don't bother writing. On the other side of my critique is that you have a light-hearted and pleasant style that makes reading a train wreck of a scenario less grief-riddled. Continue writing, just finish what you start.
Anonymous9 months agoNothing to read here........... not much of a writer, low skill-set, needs someone to mentor in basic writing. Like all over the place with no direction.
skruff1019 months agoJay the readers on this site are readers on this site because we lack the imagination to finish an unfinished story, if we had that degree of imagination we’d be the one’s writing the fucking stories and we’d at least have the decency to finish the bloody thing.
Now man up and give us an ending.
