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Click hereThe petite woman, the high class wife and mom had been definitely tamed by the savage convict.
Her son was watching; when he heard these words, he didn't believe his ears: mom was talking like a slut. What else had still to happen?
John knew very well what he had to do: carry the woman to the shower, soap and clean her thoroughly like she was a child, dry her body, scoop her up again and then lay her on the bed. His 16" long cock was claiming urgently its meal, but he had to be very careful with that petite mom, or his monster dong would have split her literally in two, like an apple.
Easily John threw Mrs. Blum over his shoulder and walked, with his small package, to the bathroom.
It was just the beginning of a long night of lust.
To be continued
- COMMENTS
Booomerover 4 years agoWhy you anonymous racist fucktard! Just stick with anonymously reviewing pornography and keep your educational viewpoint to yourself! What a racist throw away comment!
Anonymousover 7 years agoIt started okay (in my opinion) but went down fast.
Didnt seem to set a background actions seemed random just rambling.
I think this is the first story that I couldn't bother finishing in my life.
Sorry dude.
Better luck next time.
AZMotherLoveralmost 10 years agoI wanted to like this story as I like petite women with large men, but this was just ridiculous. A 16" cock? LOL
Two stars
Anonymousabout 10 years agovery quickily became interesting, sensual, and allowed us, your readers to better participate in your story. Don't take too many things for granted since people are different and, especially for us women, act and react differently to high intensity situations. Your premise is so unusual and exciting that I cannot wait to read the next chapters. It did take some re-reading of some paragraphs when you kept switching between what the convict did to her and her relationship with her son. From what was presumed as a standard family, we quickly learned that she apparently was prone to having sex, or at least being fondled, by her son and his friends,. Yes, she is proud of her body and especially her breasts and they are strong centers of pleasure. I will re-read some of this again before I move on to further chapters so I understand more of her life. The big question is, hubby is totally irrelevant so far. Seems impossible since she is so sensual and beautiful. Slow down and introduce the players more clearly so we understand the interactions that are normal and new......
Anonymousabout 13 years agoGood story so far, Pee & scat ain't really my thing so that kind of spoiled it a bit for me but what really lets it down is the exagerated 16" cock. C'mon son!! That's waaaay over the top and it makes the story unbelievable. I know you have to suspend your disbelief to an extent when reading many works of fiction but you have to strike a balance between fantasy & believability.
Anonymousover 14 years agoTonySnow is correct: the effort is there. That's where it all comes to a screeching halt. The dialogue, the spelling, the grammar... It is obvious that either English is not your first language or you have been schooled in Detroit. Get an editor. Fast.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoThe problem with this story is that you have too many fantasies going on all at once. Clearly the main theme seems to be a fascination with a petite mature woman who is at the same time, a child or a baby, being fondled and mauled like a Barbie (or more appropriately, a Betsy-Wetsy) by a hyperactive 3-year old. Next you throw in that the woman has been unfaithful to her husband many times, that she (despite being 50+ years old and her son now 18) still produces breast milk (by the gallon? - now that's medical science at its best), and she and her son are sharing incestuous play that has not yet been consummated. <br><br>
As if that weren't enough, we are then treated to a golden shower! Soon followed by complete breast suckage, then a spanking, then anal play, and then, most graphically so, she squats and craps on the floor in front of her family and four convicts. And just when I think you can't top all of the above, you say Big John the convict has a 16" cock!! OMG - he must spend a fortune having all his pants altered!<br><br>
Your Big John character sounds like Sybil - he's got so many personality changes, from tender talk to yelling, to slapping and biting, to gently nibbling - I think someone is off his meds.
