All Comments on 'Night Wolf Ch. 05'

I love the story but it is harder to read with the realistic words added here and there. If you want to use them, maybe after each of the words you can put the English translation in (); for example Nénáasêstse (come here). It is hard to read when you have to keep going to the top of the page to understand the meaning.

Please please continue this story, i can't wait to read more !

I love reading online historical romances, especially those with properly written love scenes without the disgusting terms (like 'cunt' or 'cum', for example) that ruin the drama of it, and is better than the smut I keep running across on some sites while searching for a good read such as this. This should be posted on www.fanfiction.net's sister site www.adultfanfiction.net, or, better yet, published as a book, it's that tasteful.

What would happen if, in future chapters, Ione/Falling Water were to bear Night Wolf's child who would one day be chief of the tribe? The Cheyenne medicine regarding childbirth can easily be found on Google Books, if you want to look into that. Keep up the good work. (: