All Comments on 'Night-Wolves Ch. 01'

Warms my heart... or maybe that's just gas.

An interesting start. Very good.

PN

You should try using them

@Anon- thank you for your feedback! as stated before at the start, this is an unedited story thus far (i have no editor, only friends to look it over at the current time)

@PerryNormal- thank you for your feedback as well, I simply have an avid imagination I am not a service member (due to medical issues) I am glad you are liking it so far- chapter two is complete with chapter three on the way!

I have no idea what the anon was talking about. Compared to other atrocious first time posts I've read, this first chapter was quite decent going towards good. No idea if I'm going to like the story since this was just the introduction, but the start looks promising. I'll keep an eye out for when you post the second chapter.

@Lucka478 thank you for the comment, admittedly how it is forming in my head is a rather slow burn, however, there will be erotica added in the upcoming chapters, I'm glad you like it, the 2nd chapter should be up by the weekend AEST (if I don't forget)