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Click hereNaomi snorted as the young driver wordlessly stuck a cigarette into his mouth and lit it with a battered zippo he had tucked in one of his uniform pockets as they began to slowly roll out from the airfield, following the lead truck as it drove though several towns. Naomi didn't even bother to strike a conversation with the driver, who seemed only interested in smoking and driving.
- COMMENTS
SnowPawzabout 4 years agoAuthor@Lucka478 thank you for the comment, admittedly how it is forming in my head is a rather slow burn, however, there will be erotica added in the upcoming chapters, I'm glad you like it, the 2nd chapter should be up by the weekend AEST (if I don't forget)
Lucka478about 4 years agoI have no idea what the anon was talking about. Compared to other atrocious first time posts I've read, this first chapter was quite decent going towards good. No idea if I'm going to like the story since this was just the introduction, but the start looks promising. I'll keep an eye out for when you post the second chapter.
SnowPawzabout 4 years agoAuthor@Anon- thank you for your feedback! as stated before at the start, this is an unedited story thus far (i have no editor, only friends to look it over at the current time)
@PerryNormal- thank you for your feedback as well, I simply have an avid imagination I am not a service member (due to medical issues) I am glad you are liking it so far- chapter two is complete with chapter three on the way!
PerryNormalabout 4 years agoWarms my heart... or maybe that's just gas.
An interesting start. Very good.
PN
