All Comments on 'Nightmare Master Pt. 01'

Indescribably delicious!!

She's a manic pixie pain slut and I'm so here for it. This is delightfully twisted, thank you.

Ah, Payne. You’re back.

Man, I missed your work. Can’t wait for the next part! You stories are always so wickedly hot. While I’m not a masochist, the theme around not handing over her submission strikes such a chord. Hot damn. 😈

I am absolutely in love with this story!! Please give me more Sir/Miss. it’s so well written and makes me feel so good

Oh, but this is obviously, in the most delectable terrifying way, yet another guilty pleasure ride!

God I love this, it makes me want to settle for nothing less than the perfect Master and quit vanilla, and I hate how much I love this feeling. I've been searching for authors who can mirror my dark fantasies and damn, this is almost too much in a good way!

Amazing story.

But Dalinar?? He's surely the most vanilla character in the whole cosmere - I hope she likes missionary. I'm trying to think who might be her type - Amaram? Mraize?

Now onto part 2 to see if this cosmere scandal is addressed...

A big fan from the UK x

@anonymous No way! Dalinar has incredible dominant potential, he'd just need to be... encouraged a little. Sure he's *honourable* but it would just make it hotter to corrupt him. Seconded on wanting more info, haha

Amazing!!!! The moment she realizes that soft torture is his way of romance was the icing on the cake. I love it when people find their partner especially when they’re kinks are rare.

interesting story... and some really hot dialogue from Seth's mouth... and the first meeting was very hot too..... to me Evie being mentally just and just at a 13-14 -year old level is a little jarring, but of course she's probably a "little" in some way (not fully versed in this world)... and Seth's internal dialogue is very very fluffily romantic so suddenly, and for a male, but maybe he is very young still or a real softie :). enjoyable read, still.

little surprised why this is in the Non-Con section, as it belongs to BDSM, right...?

(or was it because the first meeting was a tiny bit hazy in consent...? though she did consent, right...? )

thanks for sharing xxx

oh... something i forgot to mention... when he first takes her ass, it would be nice to know more about what's happening physically with his... it's unclear when he's entered her, and when he's started moving etc... these are the hot sexy bits for me :) so would be nice to get more of an idea what Evie is reacting to exactly when she's saying "Oh My God" etc.... just a detail, i get that you enjoy concentrating on the friendships etc. a bit more perhaps... thanks for writing. xxx

This is wonderful. Thank you.

Wonderful, would've liked to see more struggle from Evey though.

this is one of my favorite stories ever. not flawless, at times a bit overwrought, at times the characters seem immature, but so passionate and vivid and thoughtful that I'd happily pay for your work based on this one story alone. you've inspired a lot of my work.

i know you've stopped writing here, but i hope you're well and are still writing in some other way. a voice like yours should be heard :)