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tjdhall2tjdhall2over 6 years ago
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I am a follower of your creations, i truely love reading them, however, i'm not quite giving this series high marks because "I" personally don't like the fact that one of the main characters claims to love and miss the LOVE OF HER LIFE so much that she's waking up with chest pain and going into stages of depression yet conventientely has tons of sex with the whole dymn female staff and his sister while he's out there fighting for their asses, AND he hasn't so much touched or looked at another promised servent since he left the earth relm. You can create anyway you want and i'm going to read till the last period, but just wanted you to know why i was putting some chapters in favorite and giving low stars.

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Ironically last updated saying I was returning to work on stories five days before starting a job with long hours. If you stumble on this, I'm working primarily on fantasy stories. There's currently no interest from any of you in my continuing the series' I have submitted befo...

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