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All Comments on 'Niharika and the Harness'

by nihadeep

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
missing important plot elements and back-story.

Story elements like why was her virginity still so important if she was otherwise so hot to trot? ...and what was their relationship? husband/wife, BF/GF, betrothed, ... ??

I mean overall general emotional/Intellectual context is missing for this to be a really good story.

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