All Comments on 'No. 19 The Early Christmas Present'

That ending was very confusing

I don't understand?

- how much evidence do we need for:

1) divorce.

2) knowing that she is unfaithful

Apparently you need 45 photos and 12 videos. More a gang bang.

🤣

Wierd ending.

⭐⭐⭐

Incomprehensible gibberish. I think I would have liked the plot, but the writing was impossible to decipher.

Couldn’t make sense of this at all.

Huh???

The BEAR

Yeah like everyone else said, bunch of mumbo jumbo with just an idea of a plot

Impossible to follow, disjointed. 1*

the grammar made it difficult to read

Far too confusing to follow. What was her name? Ella, Kelly? Was the kid his? If so then he is an asshole. If not then nobody knows what was happening in this story as it was so badly written.

Good start, then fell off a cliff…

Um, no not believable

Not believable also what manwho is a man wouldn'tcare if he was a father

"""""I told her to take her time getting ready and then grabbed my shorts and gown and went out.""""" So how many men wear a gown?? LOL, I guess the author what gender the MC was/is?

Terrible