All Comments on 'No.6, Life as I Knew It'

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mainer42mainer429 months ago

good story but a tough read at times. better editing would have made a smoother read. Loved the topic

stewartbstewartb9 months ago

They say "Life sucks -then you die". Well sometime it sucks ... turns out you then have a great time ... then you die. Dave did it his way!

lujon2019lujon20199 months ago

eh, I never understood the "I need to let my rapist keep raping me lest my husband discover I was raped" storyline mentality

sbrooks103xsbrooks103x9 months ago

"Don't complain move on if it offends you I'm too old to care." - Bad grammar doesn't offend, what offends me is writers who don't care.

Rwg7Rwg79 months ago

Lovely story with a sad ending. Thanks for sharing.

26thNC26thNC8 months ago

Sleepy Joe writing about his fantasy about Jill and Nancy.

RanDog025RanDog0254 months ago

Didn't like it much. He divorced his wife of twenty years for a good reason but started fucking his room mate after she'd been fucking various boyfriends in her bedroom of his own place, just because she had a sexy body.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Strange. Maybe it resonates with UK readers. I found it difficult to identify with any of the characters

AnonymousAnonymous3 days ago

Dark, ominous in the end, quite emotional this one ,vague timeline held, kudos again 5 starz

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Just a sad old twit reading lots, try to comment as much as I can on anything I read to the end ( most things ) , the older I get I think that I say just what I think at that moment, if you’re writing is going to effect me then I think that it,s fair that I can tell you, I fin...