All Comments on 'No Bounds'

I loved the story and how it all meshed nicely. I have to say that I think this is a very unique concept, for lack of a better word.

Thanks for the compliment and the feed back. It is much appreciated!

You certainly thought outside of the box with this story. I liked it.

good story just to bad you could not come up with a second chapter to where jess appears all the time in another human body for them 5 stars

Thanks all for the comments. Hummm ... an interesting idea for a second chapter and one I didn't consider. I'll have to think about it some more. :)

Very nice. For a while there I though you were going to have John get Jen pregnant and the baby would be Jess.

An unusual story well written so as to present a believable situation. Furthermore, it was genuinely touching (excuse the pun). I don't know whether another chapter is really necessary as this one said it all.

Did... you... use... enough... periods... when... you... wrote... this?

If... you... need... more, I... have... a... few... you... can... borrow.

They indicate pauses in the conversations ... I ... have ... plenty ... thank ... you ... for ... your ... input.

Very strange heartwarming story worth every bit of five stars.

Now that's an idea, John and Jen have a little girl with Jess's soul, could be very interesting when little Jess grows up.

A beautiful, thoughtful, emotionally satisfying piece that will always stay with me, but in a good and satisfying way, like the memory of that first proper kiss, the headlong rush and tremble of first love, or the electric frisson at the first touch of your soulmate's skin against yours. Thank you for recapturing all of those for me.

What can I say, but Thank You Very Much!!! for the compliments.

Loved the story...the way you crafted the feelings and passion...VERY WELL DONE!!!

Different from most other stories, but a great story. Really felt like I was there. Just Amazing. Great work. Thank you

What I like most, in addition to the unusual approach, was that there was no guilt yet a lot of tenderness between the siblings!

This story is perfect. It has the love, the sex, and the great ending. 5/5 will be reading this again soon!

Again, thank you all for the wonderful comments. It definitely inspires me to continue writing. It may be hard to top this one, though.

Awesome story

Im not sure if this real or not, but hell I shed a few tears on the part about the twin sisters death, this is a great story, and just...shocking

The story line parallels a great read by Robert Heinlein titled I Will Fear No Evil. His was a great book about a loved one dying and coming back in the mind of the one they loved and both aware of each other. Yours is different enough to not be thought a knock off but for those who enjoyed your well written story I think the would love his work also. Hats off to you for a great read.

Thanks once more for all the wonderful comments. Also, thanks for the tip on the Heinlein story. I will check it out for sure!

Not gonna lie, it was a bit wierd, but it was great nonetheless.

scary, sad, sexy, sensual and very dramatic. Their union seemed a bit rushed but still beautiful.

This is my second read of the story. I just cannot shake the lingering melancholy left within me, after the first read of this story a couple of weeks ago. The death of Jess in the story, somehow feels too real to me.

This story was so out of the box in a unique romantic way in which souls are unable to break apart due to a love so intense that even death is unable to do it.

Cograts to the author on this beautifully haunting story, very skillfully writen.

5/5.

Thank you very much. Your compliment and insight are appreciated.

Yeah man the story was like all was happening in front of me the depth's the pain the immortal love were described with such reality man hats off to you buddy! The story is truly awesome the characters everything. The story in itself is complete but if you want to proceed it further who is stopping you. You know with such reality you have depicted you have all us connected to the characters ! Really made my heart sank going to read once more

Regards Dk

Don't know what else to say but ... Thank You Very Much! :)

Very moving. As the saying (from "I Married a Witch" I think) goes: "Love conquers all."

For an erotic story, that was quite beautiful.

You really do have a way with words.

Shame I can only give you 5 stars.

Thank-you for an great read !

And thank you for the very nice comment!

5* Despite the incest and fantasy themes, this was also very romantic. Both sisters got their romantic love in their own times.

Regarding your newest story with the sister blighted with nymphomania, i can only hope that you instill in her and her brother a loving path to her renewal.

Glad you liked it. In regards to my newest story, You'll soon find out this coming week. Stay tuned! :)

The story was heart-breaking and it meant so much more than the senseless sex-stories....I really like the way you have with your stories. I hope you keep this up.

Thank you for your nice comment. I have several stories in the pipeline coming soon. Not sure if they are as good as this one, but I hope so. : )

A very good story, it had love, family, romance and a taste of mystery. Look forward to more stories.

I loved the story as well. One tangent that never received closure was the mother. Not telling you how to write your stories, but she was left out to dry so to speak. I think that Randy should be put out to pasture first (caught cheating possibly). Next, have Jess inhabit the Mom's body and have a conversation with her. Then, have a three-way (technically a four-way) with Jess, Jen, mom, and John. But, definitely Randy has to be out of the picture one way or the other.

Thanks for the comment, but there will not be another chapter. I wanted it to be entirely about the siblings. Thanks again.

It was an enjoyable story, and I'm always happy to read something a little different.

But the anonymous commenter who complained about the over-use of periods is right. It was a little annoying. I understand your answer about how they indicate a pause in the conversation. But it wasn't just in the dialogue. It was everywhere.

Commas can serve the same purpose. The occasional ellipsis can deepen that effect and indicate something more about the emotion in the dialogue, and it's useful at the end of a bit of dialogue to indicate that the speaker trailed off without finishing. But when it's overused, it kind of defeats it's purpose and is rather distracting.

Again, not trying to be an ass in any way. Just sharing my thoughts about grammar and such, for what little they're worth.

I much appreciate your insightful comment. At the time, the other commenter seemed a little snarky. Even so, I did take his observation seriously and have modified my use of them. I decided to leave the story as is and moved on to another. Writing is a journey of learning and I continue to try and improve. Thanks much!

Absolutely beautiful.

I like your stories and the way you write. Keep up the good work! Thanks for your time and imagination.

just WOW!!!

Fun little read!

Thanks to all the recent commenters, it is very much appreciated!

Very much like your "My sister's keeper" , you really think out of the box. Both stories had well done eroticism, and romance. Both left me wanting even more, although they stopped at the right point. I did feel invested in the characters and would love to read more of them. I guess it would be better just to read more of your works. Thanks for writing.

This was beautiful. I can’t really say anything more than that. Fantastic work, friend

This got to me, the emotions behind it hit me and I'm not generally an empathetic person. Great work.

Ingenious

This was much better than most of the paranormal stories in this genre. The timing and the emotions were all spot on and the ending was right on time and brought everything to a close in just the right way. Most of these stories go on for far too long or leave you hanging at the end because they didn't quite finish everything. Your story took care of both of these pitfalls perfectly.

The opening is far too vague and rough. You should have revealed that the spirit of Jess was reaching out to him a lot faster than you did. I really struggled trying to get through the opening and figure out where this was heading.

I still have NOT read the entire story. I got as far as where Jen spoons her brother after the swimming pool scene when Jess does the 69 dream with him, then they both go downstairs for the family dinner that rarely occurs because of the stepfather. The story was continuing to drag on for me so I skipped to the last page.

In a strange coincidence, this turned out to be similar to a ghost story that I wrote and have already submitted for the Halloween 2022 contest. I was shocked to find that you had the same idea that I had on your last page when Jen and Jess merge together. The major difference from my story is that I'm not doing this trick using two sisters. Instead, I have two women who are BFFs and one is the ghost wife.

I gave you a 4/5 mainly because you and I have similar concepts. But because your writing was dragging tail and boring me, it probably shouldn't really rate more than a two.

This was absolutely beautiful. Thank you for writing this and sharing it.