All Comments on 'No Boys Allowed'

by Gilmuriel

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LdychasrLdychasralmost 20 years ago
very nice

you are good keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
great story

your story was great. please continue to write more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Awesome!!

That was hot! Such naughty little girls!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Fantastic!

Premise has been done many times, but never so hotly as this. I want more! And more! (and more…)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Brilliant! one of the best stories on here

Should be number 1!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
sizzling

However, the orgy part was confusing. You had too much going on at once, within a single paragraph, even. Your timimg was akward. It didn't seem natural. The dialogue sucked. But damn it was hot.

debauched_angeldebauched_angelabout 17 years ago
hot

That was fucking hot, liked all the lesbian action.

But i also thought too much was going on at once, and it was confusing. paragraphs would be helpful. and the ending with the girl deciding she was a lesbian was a bit unrealistic. but overall liked the content...sounds like something that happened to me once...the sleepover.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
wow

wish they were my friends

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
More

More of this story please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Amazing

this was a great story. i would love 2 see more from this author : )

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Like a porno - but hot.

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