by Loansum
Thought it deserved a rating of 4 Stars, uncertain why. Perhaps it was the way the author placed the father-daughter together. Why didn't daddy ask what happened to his little girl's cherry? Guess this story will be open to another chapter.
This is a good story with lots of potential. I thought the idea of making the daughter detail what her boyfriend did to her was so hot. Keep writing.
I liked it that the daughter seemingly wasn't very receptive to her daddy at first. I think her daddy knew she wasn't as afraid or embarrassed as she appeared during his advances. Maybe that's why she came to him the way she did and maybe she liked the way he looked at her in her room earlier. We really do love our Daddies you know. This story felt very normal to me, so I loved it. Keep them coming please. Nicey P.