All Comments on 'No Free Rides Pt. 01'

Please continue!

It's far too good to leave now! I loved it -- thank you and five stars.

Just more. More more more. Um please.

I enjoyed this story very much. Please write another chapter and think about a happy ending, there are too many unhappy conclusions.

YES!!! More Please!!!

Omg, love this....definitely a please more story

Please, Master... more!!

Wow! Kept me wanting more and more to read. You have talent! You didnt rush a bit of it. Most I ve read seemed rushed. Yours was absoulty great!!!! Would love if you made another. Thank you

I beg of you to continue this and when it's run it course, give us closure. That's all I can ask from you. Thank you for what you have written so far. I enjoyed it.

More please.

Well written for the most part, intensely erotic, and I look forward to the next chapter / chapters. A little better proof reading will help, and I get that proof reading onscreen is difficult, but doing that part right, after doing so many other things right, will add to the quality of the story

This story is poorly written, not proofread, and a total waste of time!

Oh wow please say gets another coming! Desperately need to continue this...

PLEASE KEEP THIS GOING!! I must know more of their story.. if it must end, please let it with closure.. I'm aching that there isn't more to shamelessly binge-read already!

......you had finished it!

Thank you to all who took a moment of your time to read and post your views and your thoughts on this story! Part 2 is coming out here soon and I can’t wait to share it with all you wonderful, lovely people! You all are amazing!!

LL

Can u plz update this I love the story don't pay any mind to those who say it's bad cause there is people who really do love this story so plz continue it

More, please! Your writing is addictive!

Oh God, yes -- more, keep this going!! Fantastic story, unbelievably hot, erotic and kinky.