All Comments on 'No Longer a Slave'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
A tragic yet beautiful story,

I saw the end coming but the power of the act was not diminished by that knowledge. Short but powerfully written. -- UK CYNIC

markellymarkellyalmost 14 years ago
Very Good.

A damn fine piece of work. A trip through the life of a Slave and Master, such a tragic ending. Well worth the read, thankyou.

areanabenoirareanabenoirover 12 years ago

So sad .... but so true , I can feel the pain of the girl.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Not the way to freedom

I feel someone needs to mention the risk of over glorifying suicide but that would make me a buzz kill

ShadowRosieShadowRosiealmost 5 years ago
Foolish Master

Masters can be idiots too. They don't realize what treasures they are given. They don't know what they are creating when they insist on certain actions. Many masters are not smart enough to actually be what they think they are. No one can be perfect to everyone. Please, slaves, submissives, and bottoms, take care of yourselves. Be aware enough that you are an individual and we all need a friend or someone outside your relationship to be a real person with. Don't let your master, beloved as they are, take away your personal self.

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