All Comments on 'No Longer Alone'

by pmpkty

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kelleigh0127kelleigh0127over 12 years ago
Great start

I really am enjoying the telling of this budding romance. I'll be looking for Chapter 2 and I hope it's soon. Your on a great track...

IrfonIrfonover 12 years ago
Wonderful story........

Highly enjoyable - thank you for writing it - more please ?

oldboneshakeroldboneshakerover 12 years ago
Wonderful Story 2................

I can only echo the previous comments. More of the same please, and maybe the patter of tiny feet too...............

addictedto4inchesaddictedto4inchesover 12 years ago
hmmmm

I love your story let me say that first, but for some reason I want to see mojo with James. I can't explain it just seems like a great fit... Weird, anyway its your story and it was a great read. I'm waiting for all of it before I vote on any of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great!

Have to agree--- was expecting more of the budding romance with James as well. Really can't wait to read more! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Team Braden

I beg of you, please don't make a long-winded love triangle and end it with James!!! Kthankxbye X

pmpktypmpktyover 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks so much

I'm really appreciating all of your comments. I'm working on the next part now and I thought to check and see how this one was doing. I have to say it really put a smile on my face. Thanks

DnaebugsDnaebugsover 11 years ago

This was such a cute story. See you can always find a gem when your not looking. Keep up the wonderful work.

PrincessLeeLeePrincessLeeLeeabout 10 years ago
Fight fight

Ooh I wanted the lady and the tramp to fight... Great story... Made me laugh...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Are you going to finish?

This needs at least another chapter to finish. What happens next?

Crazy2WheelerCrazy2Wheelerover 6 years ago
Part #2 or more could make this excellent in all areas.

Well written with some reality noted and fantasy for the ideal life, superb.

BRAVO!

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketover 6 years ago
So far ok

To me the story line and who is who gets a bit mixed up at times.

tlevanssrtlevanssralmost 3 years ago

Part 1 is good but you need to finish the story.

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