All Comments on 'No Longer Alone'

Part 1 is good but you need to finish the story.

To me the story line and who is who gets a bit mixed up at times.

Well written with some reality noted and fantasy for the ideal life, superb.

BRAVO!

This needs at least another chapter to finish. What happens next?

Ooh I wanted the lady and the tramp to fight... Great story... Made me laugh...

This was such a cute story. See you can always find a gem when your not looking. Keep up the wonderful work.

I'm really appreciating all of your comments. I'm working on the next part now and I thought to check and see how this one was doing. I have to say it really put a smile on my face. Thanks

I beg of you, please don't make a long-winded love triangle and end it with James!!! Kthankxbye X

Have to agree--- was expecting more of the budding romance with James as well. Really can't wait to read more! :)

I love your story let me say that first, but for some reason I want to see mojo with James. I can't explain it just seems like a great fit... Weird, anyway its your story and it was a great read. I'm waiting for all of it before I vote on any of it.

I can only echo the previous comments. More of the same please, and maybe the patter of tiny feet too...............

Highly enjoyable - thank you for writing it - more please ?

I really am enjoying the telling of this budding romance. I'll be looking for Chapter 2 and I hope it's soon. Your on a great track...