by Lightning454572
I'm confused. The damn **asterisks** in every other sentence didn't help, but see if I have this right. There's a competition that pays $750k to entrants who can go through November without ejaculating. Dumb, but okay. Our MC doesn't want to do it and his sister invites him to meet her friends who all offer to screw him. Why is she involved anyway? What does that have to do with NNN?
What am I missing?
ok this makes more sense now since I should have read this part of the story 1st, was not aware there were 12 parts to it until I checked to see if there were other stories posted
This author needs to disassociate himself from whoever is giving him style advice. Those asterisks are distracting, annoying, and unnecessary, and the random ALLCAPS just take me right out of the story. There are the bones of an amusing story here. I'll try a couple more chapters. Then I'll probably quit. This style makes it almost unreadable.