All Comments on 'No One Can EVER Know'

Very, very nice. Constructively speaking, you should really slow read your story a day or two after you think it is finished. By that I mean, mouth each word like a 3rd grader would read their story and you will spot silly mistakes that Grammerly will not find if the gaff is a real word. There were a number of those. But I liked how it went.

Keep 'em coming.

Man that was hot.....Please let these two keep enjoying each other on the down low.

Until Jayce is able to find the soft and/or heated dildo, they continue to meet and fuck for her satisfaction. Fucking a lesbian is an all time turn on. Many years ago, a friend sucked me off while on a break from her girlfriend. I must have cum 1/2 a gallon down her throat.

PLEASE CONTINUE,

maybe they don't meet up with the group untill they get to where the rest of them are camping,

Maybe they need a wash in the steam due to them smelling of hot sex, especially when they have cum alot,

maybe Jayce secretly likes/wants his cock.

LOVED this story.

5.0 = 💯% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟) ❤❤!

I thoroughly enjoy outdoor romance and erotic stories. With a bit more character development and perhaps additional descriptive information to get the feel/taste/smell of the surroundings this could easily go from good to great. Keep it up!