All Comments on 'No Quarter for Katherine Ch. 01'

Wow! I’m just seeing your stories and this is another great one! I love how you set the scene and flipped it to a woman. Great writing and I hope you will continue!!

Well paced - well crafted! A nice surprise in the bar on the second visit. The machinations of her mind as she pondered going or not worked well Definitely needs to be continued!

Short, powerful and erotic. Well done!

very well written, and erotic

Loved the twist, and how erotic it became after that twist.

But you have managed to hook me with this submission. You write exceptionally well and set the scene perfectly. My is submissive and also is Bi. I shall send her a link in right after I give you a five and wish there were more to give. I will be back. Thank you.l

This was exhilarating to read there was no way to know what was going to happen next. A sequel/series is needed.

Oh, trust me. I pictured myself very clearly as Jessie/Katherine...from both the sub and writer aspect. And I'm sure my confidant saw it, too, which is why he sent it!

secretsxywriter

I'm a big fan of yours so your comment means a lot to me.

I had in mind authors like you (or me) that can picture themselves getting into a situation like this.

"Do not read on your lunch break."

A long-time fan of mine sent me a link to this story...while I was at work. I have a high propensity for picking his recommendations apart. He said it was new, brief. And added a smile.

My only response? Damn him. The afternoon is going to suck! LOL

Not only sexy and exciting, but well-written too. Good grammar and word choice gets me hot....

I gasped and laughed with pleasure at the audacious twists in this story: a pleasure from end to end, and horny too.

Puritanical, not prurient. Hope you still liked the story. Or will Victoria punish me (please?).

Prurient. I don't think this word means what you think it means.

You do write some lovely, knickers-dampening stories, soppingwetpanties ;) !

Ver hot and steamy -- thank you. Five stars (more if I could give you them).

That was good. Love the twist. Looking forwards to reading more about Katherine and Her Mistress

Suspensefully written. However, cheaters and F/F don't do anything for me.

Very Nice!

I've been reading Literotica for years. I don't recall that I've ever commented before. Well done! Such a delightfully, well-crafted tale that drew the reader in and delivered a startling surprise along with sexy entertainment. You caught me, as well as Katherine, entirely wrong-footed. Well played!

I certainly hope there's a Ch. 02 to follow ....