All Comments on 'No Room at the Hotel Ch. 01'

Tex, ignore the haters, I loved the writing style. It helped me enjoy the story knowing what each character thought at all times. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Love this series! Look forward to the next chapter!

Good 2 go waiting on next installment

I understand that this is your writing style, and I fully support your decision, and right, to use any style you feel gets your ideas out to the public.

That being said, your style difficult for *me* to follow, and takes my head out of the story and out of 'the sexy place'.

See, I ain't hatin', it just isn't for me. Keep up the good work!

~P

this POV-switching you do, but it works for the story. I do wish the switches weren't quite so quick, that we had more time with one before the switch, but that's a personal preference.