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I took a deep breath. This was what I wanted. Closure. It was important to me. I could do this.
Forcing a smile and a nod, I said, "Sure."
- COMMENTS
DukeofPaducahabout 5 hours agoI was captured watching the relationship of Claire and Liam develop. Opportunity, a love potion of pheromones, hormones, endorphins and the beginnings of tender feelings each played their part in turn. Like making fire with flint and steel, this ancient dance can easily go awry with an errant gust.
I liked the setting. A road trip evokes grand adventure and a sense of motion. The diner dialogues were a little repetitive, but the characters kept things moving.
The sexy time was very nice! — Borat
Liam touched my shoulder. A question. I took his arm. An answer. — Artistry
I don’t expect to tire of this style anytime soon.
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Thank you for this trip to the Grand Canyon. It reminded me of my own trip there. It made me wish for reincarnation as a raptor. An owl. One could really rule that roost as an owl, plus they kind of freak out Native Americans. That’s on me though.
rdcyclist4 months agoOoo boy! What a great story! Good three dimensional characters and dialogue! I love it. Lookin' forward to the next chapter...
Boyd Percy11 months agoHope to return to the Grand Canyon someday! Assuming there is still water in the Colorado.
5
des91111 months agoVery well crafted story. I'm really enjoying it and looking forward to the next instalment. Thank you
uglyorangutan11 months agoToo damn funny. We saw what you did with ending this installment with more than a single line on the second page, barely. It’s a simple story but written very well with real dialogue that kept my interest. I’m needing more!! Thanks for sharing.
