All Comments on 'No Strings Ch. 02: The Next Day'

by Spaniard2017

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The story is lost some continuity. In chapter one day one she was going back to Singapore the next day. in this story she has an apartment, it seems

in Vancouver. I've never understood the fantasy of f****** in a bathroom, it's kind of dirty there. Seems to me it makes more sense for them just to go get in the car, drive to a secluded spot in a park and get it on but I guess this story was about exhibitionism for the waitress. Not necessarily a good idea.

Spaniard2017Spaniard2017over 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for your comments but I think there is some confusion. There was no mention of Singapore in Chapter 1 and no mention of Vancouver here.

As for the story line - it would be a strange world if we all shared the same fantasies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I apologize. My comment about Singapore and Vancouver was misposted. It was meant for a different story.

Spaniard2017Spaniard2017over 1 year agoAuthor

No problem. Thanks for the clarification.

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