All Comments on 'Noah's Starship Ch. 17'

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EroticChocolateEroticChocolateover 7 years ago

I just really love these two. Glad to see Noah still staying true to himself and yet still trying tu please navid great compromise. Can't wait for the next up date on this story and your other stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Well done

Wonderful story and love reading about Noah's and navids love

I do hope that Noah can stand up to navid once in a while

jacksjoojacksjooover 7 years ago
Love this story

Navid and Noah together makes me smile, chub and laugh. Navid's growing into his independence of traditional limits on his relationship with Noah is great to see. Noah asserting himself as he grows in confidence and interactions with others in this chapter is very good.

These guys are terrific! Hoping Ryan doesn't become a problem.

I would hate to see Navid's heart broken, he would never be the same if it were.

BonzerloverBonzerloverover 7 years ago
Love

Great writing. Beautifully told. More pls

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