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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
tremendous

absolutely wonderful, I hope you write many more chapters of this great idea.

mBrowmBrowover 16 years ago
Hot and delicious

Lovely start, but the BS (Brother's Seduction) could have been more subtle, played longer.

You have left us hanging and I hope you will add to this enticing start!

HB1965HB1965over 16 years ago
Needs more

Nice job. Might need to be worked on a bit as the sex could have been drawn out more. Also a good idea for a multi-part story. I hope you will write more about these characters.

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