by John_Oakman
A nice first start. I was hoping for a bit of a longer story. But this is a good start.
So I didn't respond to this earlier as I basically moving the first 2 chapters of this story (already posted elsewhere) to this site. Chapter 3 will be longer. Definity something I do need to work on.
Fun. Beyond the situation itself, I like the humour in your description of Sara's thoughts.
Sara does have quite an effect on people, especially when naked.
I will read the next chapter immediately.