All Comments on 'Normal as She Desires Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A nice first start. I was hoping for a bit of a longer story. But this is a good start.

John_OakmanJohn_Oakmanover 1 year agoAuthor

So I didn't respond to this earlier as I basically moving the first 2 chapters of this story (already posted elsewhere) to this site. Chapter 3 will be longer. Definity something I do need to work on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fun. Beyond the situation itself, I like the humour in your description of Sara's thoughts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sara does have quite an effect on people, especially when naked.

I will read the next chapter immediately.

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