All Comments on 'Normal Ch. 07-09'

Actually, the narrator was right the first time. "Amanda and me" was correct.

I am enjoying this series. Thank you.

keep up the good work

Hermahood ! You literally made me cry out of laughter.

And what about the child she has? What happens to it? How about guilt over consigning Amanda to a life of poverty and being a single mom at 18? And having your cervix pounded that hard will send you to the hospital as it happened to a female friend of mine who was dating a guy we nicknamed "Thunder" due to his prodigious size.

The point is, it's one thing to write a story that has no negative consequences, it's another to ruin someone's life and their child's life.

loving it,... do write more.... :)) ignore the nitpickers who do not realize...this is a FANTASY