by Fot1234
loving it,... do write more.... :)) ignore the nitpickers who do not realize...this is a FANTASY
And what about the child she has? What happens to it? How about guilt over consigning Amanda to a life of poverty and being a single mom at 18? And having your cervix pounded that hard will send you to the hospital as it happened to a female friend of mine who was dating a guy we nicknamed "Thunder" due to his prodigious size.
The point is, it's one thing to write a story that has no negative consequences, it's another to ruin someone's life and their child's life.
Actually, the narrator was right the first time. "Amanda and me" was correct.
I am enjoying this series. Thank you.