All Comments on 'Northbound Ch. 01'

If Paul and Lindsey are trying to make a baby, then why did Paul pull out and come on Lindsey's belly at the beginning of the story?

Also, the writing tended to be overly-descriptive, meaning long-winded. 2*s.

"A married couple goes on a ski trip with friends" where's the skiing? please don't teaser what you don't deliver.

Concur on the baby making coitus interruptus disconnect. Please don't screw this up with Mr Big impregnating Mrs Nice Person.

How long till they swap partners. Joe could give Lindsey a baby bump instead of paul

Really great start to this Cuckold story, 5 Stars!!!!! I'm hoping that Joe plants a baby in Lindsey's belly in chapter 2. I would like to see Lindsey make Paul watch as Joe impregnate's her and tell Paul he can try to prevent her having Joe's baby by eating the entire creampie out of her pussy. Can't wait for chapter 2.😋

Would love to read the next chapter....or find out how to be invited as the fifth wheel. Nobody minds an extra girlfriend crashing the party do they?

I am a big fan of your stories and it seems that this new series will be as good as the other ones or even better. Can’t wait for the next episode! 💋