All Comments on 'Northern Lights Ch. 01'

very nice story i hope part 2 be soon

For Adam to be a virgin, it seemed a bit sudden and bold that he would just strip and return from the bathroom naked. Also, maybe they talked a lot and got to know each other before the blow job, but it was unclear how much of that happened. Again for unexperienced guys (not sure of the other’s orientation) it seemed to happen fast and with almost no discussion. But a good start to hopefully a wonderful respectful mutual love story.

Uh this sounds almost identical to another story currently being published on here...

Western Skies is a great series, I could see why it inspired you. Great start, looking forward to Ch. 2

How many chapters?

I like your writing style and it's easy to read. I definitely look forward to more of this story, but I agree with another comment on here; as Adam is inexperienced, I think he would have taken a little longer to test and flirt with Wyatt. Please keep writing.

Ok this is a really small detail but how the hell does someone “screw up a slope”? Is the guy falling on it? Is he racing competitively and not getting the time he wants? From someone who started skiing when they were two years old this just doesn’t make sense to me. There’s no right or wrong way to go down a slope.

Enjoyed the hot sex & hope more chapters will cum soon! :)