All Comments on 'Nostalgia'

by Ashson

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JBEdwardsJBEdwards9 months ago

Somehow I don't think it was Amanda's first time. Lovely story. 5*~~JB

UpperNorthLeftUpperNorthLeft9 months ago

A very nice vignette. Your economical prose has told us a lot about the MC and a lot about Amanda that is left unstated. 5*

Ray RobertsRay Roberts9 months ago

You write really well over such a delicate passage of life, would that all boy/girl couplings have such a happy ending!

EastCoaster1EastCoaster19 months ago

I'd guess that while he was a Virginia, she certainly wasn't... she had a condom, was on the pill, and very casually wanted to clean up before they finished in the park...

Nice story of a male being deflowered, and yet not too fantastic to be believed.

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