by psychedelicmoth
I really enjoyed the story as a whole, I think the ending could have been better and also, the cam could have been on for LovelyUK- keep writing. A sequel would be nice.
I really enjoyed your story. It was interesting to have a different point of view, reading about someone who wasn't quite sure of his orientation and his feelings about it. It was nice to see him open to both sexes, the webcam experience, and to experimenting with a new thing. The hesitation and the worry about what other people would think was very realistic. There was something nice about the way he connects with other people. The end was maybe a little rushed, but it leaves the door open for sequels. I can imagine him taking a trip to meet LovelyUK, or hooking up with any of the other characters in the future. Or even having more experiences with Craig. I enjoyed it. Thanks.
I was hoping for some more chapters. Too bad. It got really hot towards the end then fell off.
The story was really hot and then it just ended. Thought the ending was weak how she left and they never talked about it again. The ending kinda spoiled it for me.