All Comments on 'Not an Obscene Phone Call'

I love the twist a, just the way a good short story should end.

****Good read. Thanks for sharing.

I doubt that many rape victims would react this way, but it's fiction and fantasy, so that's ok. I think it has more to do with the Nonconsent/Reluctance then the Mature category, but who's counting. In the bookstore lead-in paragraph, you say "She noticed to men inside." That should be 'two' of course - the kind of thing that spell-check won't catch, but a reading aloud might - I recommend doing that as part of your self-editing process. Overall, nice, short story - thanks!

Good story... I also rated it as a 5 to begin with Lets see where it ends up..!!