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RALovellRALovell7 months agoAuthor

Hi, This is my first time publishing a story I have written. Any comments on how I can improve my writing would be much appreciated

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShades7 months ago

Thanks for your writing

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Just a writer trying to get his feet wet so he can write his first book. You can also find me at Patreon where I am working on my first book. www.patreon.com/RALovell