All Comments on 'Not Mine'

stupid shit

Well done.

You have no chance that your story will be erotic or entertaining. Not even using the excuse of too much alcohol. Too little information and an unbelievable setup doomed this story to failure.

1 star

I absolutely love your story. If you are indeed a woman, thank you for giving a glimpse into your mind. If you're not, you've got me fooled. One request: Give me more!

R.

wrong category

LW is from the POV of one of the spouses

Not the third party slut

I see others didn't like it but I did. Needs a part two for some background but I like her struggle. I know he is a cad but I can add my own thoughts that maybe their spouses are not the great people they first fell in love with.

@lujon2019 She's not a 3rd party.

"Not even my own stupid husband who can't keep his eyes off whatever is playing on the television over the bar."

They were 2 couples out in what seems to be a sports bar.

LW can be told from any point of view. There are no "rules" to which a story must be told.

never stop reading!!!!! Guess the stories remind you of your marriage and your dead ex wife who I understand fucked over a 100 men while married to your sorry ass example of a man

RE lujon2019 : Where did you get the idea LW is for 1st person stories only? It’s true !st & 3rd POV works best, but even 2nd can be used, but to be successful you better be very good; something not too many writers here in Lit. can claim.

WE ‘ll be looking forward to your first effort—it’s always nice to read something by a good first timer.

Author, I gave you a 3. Hard to put my finger on it, but just couldn’t seem to get excited by this one. (Excited like in really interested)

Thanks for the free read. cd

Fuck the naysayers that do nothing but bitch. If you haven't been there is sucks to be you.

Wow that was really well written and I don’t usually like POV stories

Good start, now what? More?