All Comments on 'Not Satisfactory'

Great start. Good story. Kind of pathetic ending. Sorry.

Keep writing though. Maybe a different story with different characters?

I really enjoyed this first of hopefully many chapters. Please continue the story. I am giving this first installment five stars.

Yep, the ending was sucky. Ik writes think that making it vague and "let the reader think about the end" is a great idea, but in reality it isn't.

Moral of the story: don't do weed

My son and I have always had great sex. I hope you write a part two and it works out.

Please write another chapter and continue this story somehow.

Keep this storyline going. Interested in seeing what comes next

Did not like this the son is a dweeb 2 stars