Not Such a Little Girl

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As she finishes she says, "Shall I make us breakfast, and then have you fuck me in every room of the house?! "

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LordDeanLordDeanover 1 year ago

Regardless of what those picky comments were, I love this story. I found it arousing to quickly read each other's points of view.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Go back to grammar school and this time pay attention to your English teacher.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

"I think you misunderstand POV with narrative where the style is meant to be intentionally loose."

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Was this supposed to make sense? If so, you failed. It's just gibberish to mask that you have no idea what you are talking about.

ShortieJenShortieJenover 1 year agoAuthor

Honestly, I think you misunderstand POV with narrative where the style is meant to be intentionally loose.

OmegaEntertainmentOmegaEntertainmentover 1 year ago

the constant swapping and listing the pov was distracting, so much it was nearly impossible to read.

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