All Comments on 'Not What It Seems Ch. 10'

For someone who was stressing about not having an editor you did a fantastic job. Keep up the great work the chapter was excellent I gave it 5 stars.

Boring, we wait so long and get another boring chapter and my advice is to find an editor BEFORE posting again, you had the wrong tenses, wrong words, and grammar all wrong.

please write some more !!!! i dont want to wait another 3 months for another chapter ! please please please

Nice update. Hope you still keep writing. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

if u have a problem with the story then stop reading it. no one is holding a gun to ur head to read it.

Wow, very interesting characters and an incredible amount of detail... I found your story yesterday and read it right through. While it is nice to read stories that are well edited I don't think anything replaces great storytelling and structuring of the tale and you are extremely good at these aspects. I do notice some of the errors but I just chose to ignore them and focus on the story, you have mentioned that you don't have an editor so what can you do. I looked at your bio which states you are under 23 years old... it impresses me enormously that you can put together such a story! I am enjoying it a lot as you can see and hope to read more of your stuff... don't get discouraged when negative comments come up

Great story,,,,,,,sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next chapters.Please hurry,lol,,,dont worry about a few little errors,they are so small and are easily overlooked for the content of the story,,,keep up the good work,,,and it is NO WAY boring,,,,hurry with the next one,,not rushing you or anything,lol,,,,

Really great, well done! I don't quite know what to think when someone posts about it being "another boring chapter" and yet they've read all the way to here.... They only make themselves look ridiculous. In my opinion it's a really well written, well paced story, and certainly not boring. I think you've got everything going for you, and look forward to seeing the next chapter!

I check rather fanatically for updates on this story. I was just about to head out to the gym when I saw chapter 10 had posted. Well I know I should have been at the gym but your work did get my heart rate up! This was enthralling I applaud you for your talent and Alin for taking charge.

I have no idea what the goofball who criticized you was thinking. Perhaps he or she is just envious of your gift.

Thanks again for the entertainment. Can't wait for the next update.

Great. Please write more like this. About being betrayed and misunderstanding.

Don't care how long it takes just finish this story please!!!!

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