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All Comments on 'Not Your Average Checkup'

by Rallynoangels

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good, but not great

You rushed each device's effect on her. Your sequel will be even better if you take some time with details. Also, the liquid was not clearly written--did it form as a gel and then attach itself?

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

A bit too sadistic for my tastes

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